Return-Path: Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S932968AbcLMNba convert rfc822-to-8bit (ORCPT ); Tue, 13 Dec 2016 08:31:30 -0500 Received: from mx1.redhat.com ([209.132.183.28]:49820 "EHLO mx1.redhat.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S932869AbcLMNb2 (ORCPT ); Tue, 13 Dec 2016 08:31:28 -0500 Organization: Red Hat UK Ltd. Registered Address: Red Hat UK Ltd, Amberley Place, 107-111 Peascod Street, Windsor, Berkshire, SI4 1TE, United Kingdom. Registered in England and Wales under Company Registration No. 3798903 From: David Howells In-Reply-To: <9f32a79b-5795-bff4-b741-bf927a525149@gmail.com> References: <9f32a79b-5795-bff4-b741-bf927a525149@gmail.com> <51643019-bb42-4066-c824-c55b9e668ac6@man7.org> <25262.1481628931@warthog.procyon.org.uk> To: "Michael Kerrisk \(man-pages\)" Cc: dhowells@redhat.com, Michael Kerrisk , lkml , Eugene Syromyatnikov , keyrings@vger.kernel.org, linux-man Subject: Re: Revised keyrings(7) man page for review MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8BIT Date: Tue, 13 Dec 2016 13:31:26 +0000 Message-ID: <26757.1481635886@warthog.procyon.org.uk> X-Greylist: Sender IP whitelisted, not delayed by milter-greylist-4.5.16 (mx1.redhat.com [10.5.110.32]); Tue, 13 Dec 2016 13:31:28 +0000 (UTC) Sender: linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Content-Length: 973 Lines: 30 Michael Kerrisk (man-pages) wrote: > I use/Linux man-pages uses the "Oxford comma" convention. "... an optional comma ..." ;-) There's also: ... LSM security checks are still performed, and may filter out further keys that the process is not authorized to view. but has two parts and isn't a list... ;-P > >> D The key is dead (i.e., has been deleted). (A > >> key may be briefly in this state during > >> garbage collection.) > > > > No - "dead" in this context means that the key type was unregistered. > > Okay, so the text should read as: > > D The key is dead (i.e., the key has been unregis‐ > tered). (A key may be briefly in this state > during garbage collection.) > > Right? Not quite. The driver for the key type has been unregistered, not the key. David