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Date:   Wed, 7 Mar 2018 23:11:24 +0100
From:   Pavel Machek <pavel@ucw.cz>
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Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 2/8] [PATCH 2/8] Documentations: dt-bindings: Add a
 document of PECI adapter driver for Aspeed AST24xx/25xx SoCs
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Hi!

> >Are these SoCs x86-based?
>=20
> Yes, these are ARM SoCs. Please see Andrew's answer as well.

Understood, thanks.

> >>+	Read sampling point selection. The whole period of a bit time will be
> >>+	divided into 16 time frames. This value will determine which time fra=
me
> >>+	this controller will sample PECI signal for data read back. Usually in
> >>+	the middle of a bit time is the best.
> >
> >English? "This value will determine when this controller"?
> >
>=20
> Could I change it like below?:
>=20
> "This value will determine in which time frame this controller samples PE=
CI
> signal for data read back"

I guess... I'm not native speaker, I guess this could be improved some
more.

Best regards,
									Pavel

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