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From:   Nathan Chancellor <natechancellor@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [PATCH] Trivial numbering change in comments.
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On Tue, Aug 28, 2018 at 04:08:18PM -0400, Ray Clinton wrote:
> I'm trying to get my feet wet in kernel dev and while working on a patch
> I noticed in a lengthy comment block that the number "2" was skipped
> in a description of the steps of a protocol. This patch is simply correcting
> this. This is for 4.18.0.
> 
> It is a very trivial patch, but this is my first actual try at one and
> thought I
> might start out small (and I don't think you can get smaller than a single
>  character change). Any and all advice (about this patch, email, or
> anything else) is very welcome.
> 
> Thanks so much!
> Ray
> 
> Signed-off-by: Ray Clinton <mr.ray.clinton@gmail.com>
> ---
>  drivers/staging/android/uapi/vsoc_shm.h | 2 +-
>  1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
> 
> diff --git a/drivers/staging/android/uapi/vsoc_shm.h
> b/drivers/staging/android/uapi/vsoc_shm.h
> index 6291fb2..0301172 100644
> --- a/drivers/staging/android/uapi/vsoc_shm.h
> +++ b/drivers/staging/android/uapi/vsoc_shm.h
> @@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ struct fd_scoped_permission_arg {
>   *    The transmitter can choose any appropriate hashing algorithm, including
>   *    hash = futex_offset & ((1 << num_nodes_lg2) - 1)
>   *
> - * 3. The transmitter should atomically compare and swap futex_offset with 0
> + * 2. The transmitter should atomically compare and swap futex_offset with 0
>   *    at hash. There are 3 possible outcomes
>   *      a. The swap fails because the futex_offset is already in the table.
>   *         The transmitter should stop.
> -- 
> 2.7.4

Hi Ray,

Welcome to Linux kernel development and good first patch. Just a few
words of advice for any future patches that you submit!

Make sure to include what subsystem you are modifying in the commit
title. You can see examples by using 'git log --online <path>'; for
this subsystem, it's usually "staging: android: vsoc:", making this
patch's title "staging: android: vsoc: Trivial numbering change in comments".

I'd recommend keeping author details (such as your experience and other
info) in-between the '---' and the file names modified in the patch so
that they can be read by the maintainers/reviewers but not added to the
commit message by 'git am'. This is also helpful for adding comments
like what changed between versions of the patch or maybe something like
"I'm not sure this change is correct, it could also be done via <method>,
I'd like some review".

Small nits in the grand scheme of things but they'll come in handy as
you develop more and more complex patches and series.

Reviewed-by: Nathan Chancellor <natechancellor@gmail.com>

Cheers!
Nathan