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Subject: Re: [PATCH v8 2/2] PCI: amlogic: Add the Amlogic Meson PCIe
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To:     Bjorn Helgaas <helgaas@kernel.org>
CC:     Lorenzo Pieralisi <lorenzo.pieralisi@arm.com>,
        Yue Wang <yue.wang@amlogic.com>,
        Kevin Hilman <khilman@baylibre.com>,
        Carlo Caione <carlo@caione.org>,
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        Rob Herring <robh@kernel.org>,
        Gustavo Pimentel <gustavo.pimentel@synopsys.com>,
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        Yixun Lan <yixun.lan@amlogic.com>,
        Liang Yang <liang.yang@amlogic.com>,
        Jianxin Pan <jianxin.pan@amlogic.com>,
        Qiufang Dai <qiufang.dai@amlogic.com>,
        Jian Hu <jian.hu@amlogic.com>
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From:   Hanjie Lin <hanjie.lin@amlogic.com>
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Date:   Wed, 19 Dec 2018 19:13:47 +0800
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On 2018/12/19 6:47, Bjorn Helgaas wrote:
> On Tue, Dec 18, 2018 at 04:04:46PM +0800, Hanjie Lin wrote:
>> From: Yue Wang <yue.wang@amlogic.com>
>>
>> The Amlogic Meson PCIe host controller is based on the Synopsys DesignWare
>> PCI core. This patch adds the driver support for Meson PCIe controller.
> 
> I don't have any comments on the code itself; just the trivial things
> below.  No need to repost for these unless you're changing something
> else.
> 
> I thought it looked very pretty overall, thanks for paying attention
> to that!
> 
>> +static int meson_size_to_payload(struct meson_pcie *mp, int size)
>> +{
>> +	struct device *dev = mp->pci.dev;
>> +
>> +	/*
>> +	 * dwc supports 2^(val+7) payload size, which val is 0~5 default to 1.
>> +	 * So if input size is not 2^order alignment or less than 2^7 or bigger
>> +	 * than 2^12, just set to default size 2^(1+7).
>> +	 */
>> +	if (!is_power_of_2(size) || size < 128 || size > 4096) {
>> +		dev_warn(dev, "playload size %d, set to default 256\n", size);
> 
> s/playload/payload/
> 
>> +static void meson_set_max_payload(struct meson_pcie *mp, int size)
>> +{
>> +	u32 val = 0;
> 
> Unnecessary initialization.
> 
>> +	int max_payload_size = meson_size_to_payload(mp, size);
>> +
>> +	val = meson_elb_readl(mp, PCIE_DEV_CTRL_DEV_STUS);
> 
>> +static int meson_pcie_rd_own_conf(struct pcie_port *pp, int where, int size,
>> +				  u32 *val)
>> +{
>> +	struct dw_pcie *pci = to_dw_pcie_from_pp(pp);
>> +	int ret;
>> +
>> +	ret = dw_pcie_read(pci->dbi_base + where, size, val);
>> +	if (ret != PCIBIOS_SUCCESSFUL)
>> +		return ret;
>> +
>> +	/*
>> +	 * There is a bug in the MESON AXG pcie controller whereby software
>> +	 * cannot programme the PCI_CLASS_DEVICE register, so we must fabricate
>> +	 * the return value in the config accessors.
> 
> s/pcie/PCIe/
> s/programme/program/ (IIUC, "programme" is British and only used as a
> noun, where here you need a verb)
> 
>> +static int meson_pcie_link_up(struct dw_pcie *pci)
>> +{
>> +	struct meson_pcie *mp = to_meson_pcie(pci);
>> +	struct device *dev = pci->dev;
>> +	u32 smlh_up = 0;
>> +	u32 ltssm_up = 0;
>> +	u32 rdlh_up = 0;
> 
> Unnecessary initialization of smlh_up, ltssm_up, and rdlh_up.
> 
>> +	u32 speed_okay = 0;
>> +	u32 cnt = 0;
>> +	u32 state12, state17;
>> +
>> +	do {
>> +		state12 = meson_cfg_readl(mp, PCIE_CFG_STATUS12);
>> +		state17 = meson_cfg_readl(mp, PCIE_CFG_STATUS17);
>> +		smlh_up = IS_SMLH_LINK_UP(state12);
>> +		rdlh_up = IS_RDLH_LINK_UP(state12);
>> +		ltssm_up = IS_LTSSM_UP(state12);
> 
>> +	dev_err(dev, "Error: Wait linkup timeout.\n");
> 
> Message doesn't match others from driver (capitalization and trailing
> period).
> 
>> +			dev_err(dev, "failed to get msi irq\n");
> 
> s/msi irq/MSI IRQ/
> 
>> +	ret = meson_add_pcie_port(mp, pdev);
>> +	if (ret < 0) {
>> +		dev_err(dev, "Add PCIE port failed, %d\n", ret);
> 
> s/PCIE/PCIe/
> 
> All the messages in this function are capitalized differently than
> other messages in the driver.
> 
> Bjorn
> 
> .
> 

hi Bjorn:

Thanks for the all suggestions and corrections.

There were too many code details unnecessary initialization, typing errors
and coding style etc. I will pay more attention to these rules and code-details
in the future patches also my daily work.

thanks again

hanjie.