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[209.132.180.67]) by mx.google.com with ESMTP id u24si1402207edl.447.2019.11.07.04.26.50; Thu, 07 Nov 2019 04:27:13 -0800 (PST) Received-SPF: pass (google.com: best guess record for domain of linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org designates 209.132.180.67 as permitted sender) client-ip=209.132.180.67; Authentication-Results: mx.google.com; dkim=pass header.i=@gmail.com header.s=20161025 header.b=Yini2AyJ; spf=pass (google.com: best guess record for domain of linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org designates 209.132.180.67 as permitted sender) smtp.mailfrom=linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org; dmarc=pass (p=NONE sp=QUARANTINE dis=NONE) header.from=gmail.com Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S2388450AbfKGM0R (ORCPT + 99 others); Thu, 7 Nov 2019 07:26:17 -0500 Received: from mail-ed1-f66.google.com ([209.85.208.66]:37607 "EHLO mail-ed1-f66.google.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1726810AbfKGM0Q (ORCPT ); Thu, 7 Nov 2019 07:26:16 -0500 Received: by mail-ed1-f66.google.com with SMTP id k14so1736683eds.4; Thu, 07 Nov 2019 04:26:15 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20161025; h=mime-version:references:in-reply-to:reply-to:from:date:message-id :subject:to:cc; bh=5zd4Ac0HKb/eYHdf/6q999KQ0xYxHpxQr0ZZ2RjV40g=; b=Yini2AyJnthvIkbE/4+jgfvhe+yNOfCFjhMWGkUu75lY28pYvBIwJagIapT15MOLoi ftuNltvHgnWcY8g9qyMQnh5a9WTks96WILHCIIsnZGIK2KyKyaKzYVD/hsd3IdlcSvAC Z88YI7vNjZLFgucoRKCZ6NAU1uwipvCo7vBmi0MnXp4IMiEeeUONNk3i3rb50Q9tHfrC FI6wHXWYkpenNudF3XTrmq6oHnWXV1YqFcl71tq1yaommu/sJxdFG5G3TmnaHw7z3VjL itxUxrhmk93X5qszQ/JMTjSK2cglcHMQGEtHmwmGKrQ9ujB+9NM9Ij2fjdIZw7uasHfF Kirg== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:references:in-reply-to:reply-to :from:date:message-id:subject:to:cc; bh=5zd4Ac0HKb/eYHdf/6q999KQ0xYxHpxQr0ZZ2RjV40g=; b=EV+iCmN2rKU8aw4GvY8kjxU/2fAz9qlREX54uxWQJMPXtU2ym4PqmsYV6Gnb35bmOd dMj8i08SIpKNa62aKj1YQvWuZggJcQgzC/QQIuf94He+d1VXujgQJ3co7LQZnokGPPkr GFOTN3qYgONCgFXzCpQycmd2t+thBwL9sfbLAMfuFAXJuAItjGCGg6WGcxwlu5oWfqD6 G9g6F/IUfQxYlcL3hpOMhYZowyK996qWm35/Nl9DhlA/lIZFgdUHQk/jN4vIrgLLJ6hU LQQQr8clB2A2fb96CEIUu1ZrSfBwX00LwH3xaQhQgDqQdLusZ83xlpsCoXNs1AplTRlY lc8w== X-Gm-Message-State: APjAAAUVTWCfnZr9yJyZpDFrPm9yRrVJOz2XO07MR9qpSzXN4/TjzI/e mEaQpn+fr81T3HXGdKudgSwjnjL0nSLBFEmqGZ4= X-Received: by 2002:a17:906:5c55:: with SMTP id c21mr2636918ejr.214.1573129574736; Thu, 07 Nov 2019 04:26:14 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 References: <20191025170726.rqsquw4v4cuhduek@wittgenstein> In-Reply-To: <20191025170726.rqsquw4v4cuhduek@wittgenstein> Reply-To: mtk.manpages@gmail.com From: "Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)" Date: Thu, 7 Nov 2019 13:26:03 +0100 Message-ID: Subject: Re: For review: documentation of clone3() system call To: Christian Brauner Cc: Christian Brauner , lkml , linux-man , Kees Cook , Florian Weimer , Oleg Nesterov , Arnd Bergmann , David Howells , Pavel Emelyanov , Andrew Morton , Adrian Reber , Andrei Vagin , Linux API , Jann Horn Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Sender: linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Hey, Christian, Ping! Cheers, Michael On Fri, 25 Oct 2019 at 19:09, Christian Brauner wrote: > > On Fri, Oct 25, 2019 at 06:59:31PM +0200, Michael Kerrisk (man-pages) wrote: > > Hello Christian and all, > > > > I've made a first shot at adding documentation for clone3(). You can > > see the diff here: > > https://git.kernel.org/pub/scm/docs/man-pages/man-pages.git/commit/?id=faa0e55ae9e490d71c826546bbdef954a1800969 > > > > In the end, I decided that the most straightforward approach was to > > add the documentation as part of the existing clone(2) page. This has > > the advantage of avoiding duplication of information across two pages, > > and perhaps also makes it easier to see the commonality of the two > > APIs. > > > > Because the new text is integrated into the existing page, I think it > > makes most sense to just show that page text for review purposes. I > > welcome input on the below. > > > > The notable changes are: > > * In the first part of the page, up to and including the paragraph > > with the subheading "The flags bit mask" > > * Minor changes in the description of CLONE_CHILD_CLEARTID, > > CLONE_CHILD_SETTID, CLONE_PARENT_SETTID, and CLONE_PIDFD, to reflect > > the argument differences between clone() and clone2() > > > > Most of the resy of page is unchanged. > > > > I welcome fixes, suggestions for improvements, etc. > > Thank you Michael, for doing this. I will hopefully get around to > reviewing this soon but it might take a few days (latest after next week > :( because of OSS/LSS). > > Christian -- Michael Kerrisk Linux man-pages maintainer; http://www.kernel.org/doc/man-pages/ Linux/UNIX System Programming Training: http://man7.org/training/