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Hi Jon, thanks for the review.


Would you please rephrase this? My first language isn't English and I am 
not sure I understood that.

> It's best in general to avoid refilling paragraphs so as to make it clear
> what is being changed.  But we would also like to avoid creating such long
> lines.  Perhaps an add-on patch refilling things would satisfy both
> criteria here.