Received: by 2002:a05:6a10:22f:0:0:0:0 with SMTP id 15csp497910pxk; Wed, 9 Sep 2020 10:41:36 -0700 (PDT) X-Google-Smtp-Source: ABdhPJyAOB8+RnjeQDxhM5/SpvLiA7N5rPc7dAR+zK9S9ZeYHduTUaj1M4yg05bRjXaa8UrXyb5R X-Received: by 2002:a17:906:370a:: with SMTP id d10mr4992139ejc.393.1599673296708; Wed, 09 Sep 2020 10:41:36 -0700 (PDT) ARC-Seal: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; t=1599673296; cv=none; d=google.com; s=arc-20160816; b=auSggklJnmGJ2x1TrlDAlTAlf3ygIBBShRqzRxbc6mgcFK+x2yiCMVKB0513DsnkPU OcfWwloJjgX1arGbXqjIK3hntJRavTXzhxpFFfjxSqG8hH57Zf9enA3dPwerVZjLnpuw BWYWKCj6yKP6MlKKwwhj5se57DgaKlbZTM+C/4j18jqb2EvbYTk0aWHazCz/U3sM5foy wcCWj0XUzqdahXEN6AkeovSvxAGELdRdzCMmSP40GpA/aasm3PZK9o/lzIZwm2q9MGUT MWgW5NwmKejUqtfQpqGqxBcUR7LuPX2VqvQpPMw2TDOoc7zWYtwQWSqfEYqoMQ6Z+F/c RZ2Q== ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=google.com; s=arc-20160816; h=list-id:precedence:sender:content-transfer-encoding:mime-version :organization:references:in-reply-to:message-id:subject:cc:to:from :date; bh=60NpAhPp29Fd7uOiy8KBT3u+AHRcoDGTzp9IM+UO7Vs=; b=z2C6bpZo3AMjBJd6I8nRkv2j5UMnZYGFykh4A0/GAJljgYrNlDjOZCUsgjelxG7Boc 9o6a3HKsm0KXJaADWBLXzD1uFK9keLS4kEqihpRSo/neIHwCr3RDzfKoCmK6Zuz0vUA2 mO7gYwle0DJQ4NS/zlGgx50NLFyOb4nz4VzFlJqLHyTwdkir7BgfWt4awrpMSZTbjne7 m71gZSGI0i8DRp4gpg2PzABna/uvF254iIrfQh3AVVKFdGRGPxAmDJlpNVoONtd/9bGw OgBrWAO9X9ksBu0zsdAzZLW7iGyasYzNV96Ba+XoqPVNyZibXwknZgxjOsgP7b2ghcHi 7e2g== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx.google.com; spf=pass (google.com: domain of linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org designates 23.128.96.18 as permitted sender) smtp.mailfrom=linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org Return-Path: Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org. [23.128.96.18]) by mx.google.com with ESMTP id z9si2021062ede.431.2020.09.09.10.41.14; Wed, 09 Sep 2020 10:41:36 -0700 (PDT) Received-SPF: pass (google.com: domain of linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org designates 23.128.96.18 as permitted sender) client-ip=23.128.96.18; Authentication-Results: mx.google.com; spf=pass (google.com: domain of linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org designates 23.128.96.18 as permitted sender) smtp.mailfrom=linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1729135AbgIIRkP (ORCPT + 99 others); Wed, 9 Sep 2020 13:40:15 -0400 Received: from lindbergh.monkeyblade.net ([23.128.96.19]:39554 "EHLO lindbergh.monkeyblade.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1726426AbgIIRkN (ORCPT ); Wed, 9 Sep 2020 13:40:13 -0400 Received: from ms.lwn.net (ms.lwn.net [IPv6:2600:3c01:e000:3a1::42]) by lindbergh.monkeyblade.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4DA44C061573; Wed, 9 Sep 2020 10:40:13 -0700 (PDT) Received: from lwn.net (localhost [127.0.0.1]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ms.lwn.net (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 6F527844; Wed, 9 Sep 2020 17:40:12 +0000 (UTC) Date: Wed, 9 Sep 2020 11:40:11 -0600 From: Jonathan Corbet To: Ralph Campbell Cc: , , , Anshuman Khandual , Andrew Morton Subject: Re: [PATCH v2] mm/doc: editorial pass on page migration Message-ID: <20200909114011.43b7649b@lwn.net> In-Reply-To: <20200902225247.15213-1-rcampbell@nvidia.com> References: <20200902225247.15213-1-rcampbell@nvidia.com> Organization: LWN.net MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Sender: linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org On Wed, 2 Sep 2020 15:52:47 -0700 Ralph Campbell wrote: > Add Sphinx reference links to HMM and CPUSETS, and numerous small > editorial changes to make the page_migration.rst document more readable. > > Signed-off-by: Ralph Campbell > --- > > The patch applies cleanly to the latest linux or linux-mm tree. > Since this is MM relatated, perhaps Andrew Morton would like to > take this into the linux-mm tree. > > Changes in v2: > Applied suggestions from Randy Dunlap: > Replace outdated ftp:// link to https://github > Changed "off node" to "off-node" and "non-lru" to "non-LRU" > > .../admin-guide/cgroup-v1/cpusets.rst | 2 + > Documentation/vm/hmm.rst | 2 +- > Documentation/vm/page_migration.rst | 164 +++++++++--------- > 3 files changed, 87 insertions(+), 81 deletions(-) Applied, thanks. jon