Date: Fri, 6 Oct 2006 21:08:11 -0700
From: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@xenotime.net>
To: Matt LaPlante <kernel1@cyberdogtech.com>
Cc: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, trivial@kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH 19-rc1]  Fix typos in /Documentation : 'U-Z'
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On Fri, 6 Oct 2006 22:52:11 -0400 Matt LaPlante wrote:

> Hi Randy,
>   Thanks for the feedback as always.  See below...
> 
> > > -iii.Ability to represent large i/os w/o unecessarily breaking them up (i.e
> > > +iii.Ability to represent large i/os w/o unnecessarily breaking them up (i.e
> > 
> > I'd prefer to see "I/Os"  "without"   "i.e.".
> 
> This style is throughout this text.  It can be changed, but would be easier to do in
> its own diff rather than changing the whole file here.  Left as-is.

Yes, agreed.


> > > -       triggers an interrupt on the SPU. The  value  writting  to  the  signal
> > > +       triggers an interrupt on the SPU.  The  value  writing  to  the  signal
> > 
> > I think that should be "written".
> > 
> > > -may result unpredictabe behavior.
> > > +may result unpredictable behavior.
> > 
> >    may result in unpredictable behavior.
> > 
> 
> Fixed and Fixed.  Updated version below.

Acked-by: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@xenotime.net>

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