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Date:   Fri, 5 Nov 2021 09:34:10 -0400
From:   Alan Stern <stern@rowland.harvard.edu>
To:     Greg KH <gregkh@linuxfoundation.org>
Cc:     Haimin Zhang <tcs.kernel@gmail.com>, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org,
        linux-usb@vger.kernel.org, Haimin Zhang <tcs_kernel@tencent.com>,
        TCS Robot <tcs_robot@tencent.com>
Subject: Re: [PATCH 2/2] USB: ehci_brcm_hub_control: replace wIndex-1 with
 temp
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On Fri, Nov 05, 2021 at 09:52:13AM +0100, Greg KH wrote:
> On Fri, Nov 05, 2021 at 04:33:57PM +0800, Haimin Zhang wrote:
> > In function `ehci_brcm_hub_control`, like following code,  
> > it filters out the case where the upper byte of wIndex is nonzero, 
> > so it need be replaced with temp.
> 
> I do not understand this text, can you try to reword it?
> 
> And you have trailing whitespace.
> 
> And why use `?
> 
> > ```
> 
> What is this for?  Changelog comments are not in markdown format.
> 
> > 	if ((typeReq == GetPortStatus) &&
> > 	    (wIndex && wIndex <= ports) &&       // need to be replaced
> 
> What does this comment mean?
> 
> > 	    ehci->reset_done[wIndex-1] &&
> > 	    time_after_eq(jiffies, ehci->reset_done[wIndex-1]) &&
> > 	    (ehci_readl(ehci, status_reg) & PORT_RESUME)) {
> > ```
> > 
> > Signed-off-by: Haimin Zhang <tcs_kernel@tencent.com>
> > Reported-by: TCS Robot <tcs_robot@tencent.com>
> 
> Again, lines need to be in different order, and your from: line is not
> correct.
> 
> Also, you need an individual email address, not a group email alias for
> your contributions.  We work with individuals, not groups.
> 
> 
> 
> > ---
> >  drivers/usb/host/ehci-brcm.c | 6 +++---
> >  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
> > 
> > diff --git a/drivers/usb/host/ehci-brcm.c b/drivers/usb/host/ehci-brcm.c
> > index a1e3290e5459..efcfca162126 100644
> > --- a/drivers/usb/host/ehci-brcm.c
> > +++ b/drivers/usb/host/ehci-brcm.c
> > @@ -73,9 +73,9 @@ static int ehci_brcm_hub_control(
> >  	 * of RESUME
> >  	 */
> >  	if ((typeReq == GetPortStatus) &&
> > -	    (wIndex && wIndex <= ports) &&
> > -	    ehci->reset_done[wIndex-1] &&
> > -	    time_after_eq(jiffies, ehci->reset_done[wIndex-1]) &&
> > +	    (temp < ports) &&
> 
> Where did temp come from?

Also, as long as this piece of code is being changed, it would be a good 
idea to get rid of all the unnecessary parentheses.

Alan Stern