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Date:   Thu, 31 Mar 2022 08:43:58 +0200
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Subject: Re: [RFC PATCH 1/5] dt-bindings: sound: Add Apple Macs sound system
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        Liam Girdwood <lgirdwood@gmail.com>,
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        Rob Herring <robh+dt@kernel.org>,
        Krzysztof Kozlowski <krzk+dt@kernel.org>,
        Jaroslav Kysela <perex@perex.cz>, Takashi Iwai <tiwai@suse.com>
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        Hector Martin <marcan@marcan.st>,
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From:   Krzysztof Kozlowski <krzysztof.kozlowski@linaro.org>
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On 31/03/2022 02:04, Martin Povišer wrote:
> Add binding for Apple Silicon Macs' machine-level sound system.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Martin Povišer <povik+lin@cutebit.org>
> ---
>  .../bindings/sound/apple,macaudio.yaml        | 103 ++++++++++++++++++
>  1 file changed, 103 insertions(+)
>  create mode 100644 Documentation/devicetree/bindings/sound/apple,macaudio.yaml
> 

Commit title does not match subsystem.

> diff --git a/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/sound/apple,macaudio.yaml b/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/sound/apple,macaudio.yaml
> new file mode 100644
> index 000000000000..a6380e4bdd1a
> --- /dev/null
> +++ b/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/sound/apple,macaudio.yaml
> @@ -0,0 +1,103 @@
> +# SPDX-License-Identifier: (GPL-2.0-only OR BSD-2-Clause)
> +%YAML 1.2
> +---
> +$id: http://devicetree.org/schemas/sound/apple,macaudio.yaml#
> +$schema: http://devicetree.org/meta-schemas/core.yaml#
> +
> +title: Apple Silicon Macs integrated sound system
> +
> +maintainers:
> +  - Martin Povišer <povik+lin@cutebit.org>
> +

Add description.

> +definitions:

This does not make code more readable.

> +  dai:
> +    type: object
> +    properties:
> +      sound-dai: true
> +    required:
> +      - sound-dai
> +
> +properties:
> +  compatible:
> +    items:
> +      - enum:
> +          - apple,j274-macaudio
> +          - apple,j293-macaudio
> +          - apple,j314-macaudio
> +      - const: apple,macaudio

Open example-schema.yaml and look at formatting plus general coding
style. You miss line breaks making it unreadable.

> +  "#address-cells":
> +    const: 1
> +  "#size-cells":
> +    const: 0
> +  model:
> +    description: |
> +      Model name to use when the sound system is presented to users as a sound card.
> +    $ref: /schemas/types.yaml#/definitions/string
> +
> +patternProperties:
> +  "^dai-link(@[0-9a-f]+)?$":
> +    description: |
> +      A DAI link comprising of CPU and CODEC DAI specifiers and supplemental properties.
> +    type: object
> +    properties:
> +      reg:
> +        maxItems: 1
> +      mclk-fs:
> +        description: |
> +          Forced MCLK/samplerate factor (optional).

Optional is obvious from !required.

Description is different than existing field in simple card. Is this the
same field or not?

> +        $ref: /schemas/types.yaml#/definitions/uint32
> +      link-name:
> +        description: Name for the DAI link to present to users.
> +        $ref: /schemas/types.yaml#/definitions/string
> +      cpu:
> +        $ref: "#/definitions/dai"
> +      codec:
> +        $ref: "#/definitions/dai"

missing maxItems for DAI phandles.

> +    required:
> +      - reg
> +      - cpu
> +      - codec
> +    additionalProperties: false

This entire block is unreadable.

> +
> +required:
> +  - compatible
> +  - model
> +
> +additionalProperties: false
> +
> +examples:
> +  - |
> +    sound {
> +      compatible = "apple,j293-macaudio", "apple,macaudio";
> +      model = "MacBook Pro J293 integrated audio";
> +
> +      #address-cells = <1>;
> +      #size-cells = <0>;
> +
> +      dai-link@0 {
> +        reg = <0>;
> +        link-name = "Speakers";
> +        mclk-fs = <64>;
> +
> +        cpu {
> +          sound-dai = <&mca 0>, <&mca 1>;
> +        };
> +        codec {
> +          sound-dai = <&speaker_left_front>, <&speaker_right_front>,
> +            <&speaker_left_rear>, <&speaker_right_rear>;

Align the line.

> +        };
> +      };
> +
> +      dai-link@1 {
> +        reg = <1>;
> +        link-name = "Headphones Jack";
> +        mclk-fs = <64>;
> +
> +        cpu {
> +          sound-dai = <&mca 2>;
> +        };
> +        codec {
> +          sound-dai = <&jack_codec>;
> +        };
> +      };
> +    };


Best regards,
Krzysztof