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Subject: Re: [PATCH 4/9] docs: i2c: smbus-protocol: improve DataLow/DataHigh
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From:   Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
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On 8/8/22 21:17, luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com wrote:
> From: Luca Ceresoli <luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com>
> 
> Use a more professional wording.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Luca Ceresoli <luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/i2c/smbus-protocol.rst | 4 ++--
>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/Documentation/i2c/smbus-protocol.rst b/Documentation/i2c/smbus-protocol.rst
> index 55e209c7e520..4942c4cad4ad 100644
> --- a/Documentation/i2c/smbus-protocol.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/i2c/smbus-protocol.rst
> @@ -45,8 +45,8 @@ Addr  (7 bits)  I2C 7 bit address. Note that this can be expanded to
>                  get a 10 bit I2C address.
>  Comm  (8 bits)  Command byte, a data byte which often selects a register on
>                  the device.
> -Data  (8 bits)  A plain data byte. Sometimes, I write DataLow, DataHigh
> -                for 16 bit data.
> +Data  (8 bits)  A plain data byte. DataLow and DataHigh represent the low and
> +                high byte of a 16 bit word.
>  Count (8 bits)  A data byte containing the length of a block operation.
>  
>  [..]            Data sent by I2C device, as opposed to data sent by the host

Looks better, thanks.

Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>

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