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[2620:137:e000::1:20]) by mx.google.com with ESMTP id j14-20020a056402238e00b0043c30f0f4a6si520421eda.107.2022.08.11.14.36.07; Thu, 11 Aug 2022 14:36:34 -0700 (PDT) Received-SPF: pass (google.com: domain of linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org designates 2620:137:e000::1:20 as permitted sender) client-ip=2620:137:e000::1:20; Authentication-Results: mx.google.com; dkim=pass header.i=@kernel.org header.s=k20201202 header.b=dJjPDtiR; spf=pass (google.com: domain of linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org designates 2620:137:e000::1:20 as permitted sender) smtp.mailfrom=linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org; dmarc=pass (p=NONE sp=NONE dis=NONE) header.from=kernel.org Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S235749AbiHKVOE (ORCPT + 99 others); Thu, 11 Aug 2022 17:14:04 -0400 Received: from lindbergh.monkeyblade.net ([23.128.96.19]:50940 "EHLO lindbergh.monkeyblade.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S229594AbiHKVOC (ORCPT ); Thu, 11 Aug 2022 17:14:02 -0400 Received: from ams.source.kernel.org (ams.source.kernel.org [145.40.68.75]) by lindbergh.monkeyblade.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id D50AD99B57; Thu, 11 Aug 2022 14:14:01 -0700 (PDT) Received: from smtp.kernel.org (relay.kernel.org [52.25.139.140]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ams.source.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 7219DB82292; Thu, 11 Aug 2022 21:14:00 +0000 (UTC) Received: by smtp.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 52274C433D6; Thu, 11 Aug 2022 21:13:58 +0000 (UTC) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=kernel.org; s=k20201202; t=1660252439; bh=UEGFuFwbf7DEIfkoWKKvlIAB1teWJmIDIeNakWiee3Y=; h=Date:From:To:Cc:Subject:References:In-Reply-To:From; b=dJjPDtiRW21vLIJAnCb8MrA7nuiYS7pVsXO1wHR4sMMPt15eQax/fRzvsdnVv4cmB Su1honK3uqVEpA2aL+PyW8dDjgAwLOA0BghaDm7WKCg1f1frWz2FzPZ80/KvzyfeLP 1oLPfXTRzQbv1YwAOXEuBT/G8bNqMYVaShVtzCvGcDBlC/CQXVkSFeQHNpBo+/Y0ET KxY6+pWrN6MVbHIEn9RMNXP94oFr22NDXG5m8VZr38WnXczDGfXDqy8Dr2rTxFJTl5 CS+xyAJ6UrMKet9bnluQ77mOLN3CksMOLo4XjWM5GM1YBUOSD1uv7Y2bxSzGdvNv+9 FIYsyM4CVUQew== Date: Thu, 11 Aug 2022 23:13:55 +0200 From: Wolfram Sang To: luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com Cc: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-i2c@vger.kernel.org, Peter Rosin , linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH 8/9] docs: i2c: i2c-sysfs: improve wording Message-ID: Mail-Followup-To: Wolfram Sang , luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-i2c@vger.kernel.org, Peter Rosin , linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org References: <20220808141708.1021103-1-luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com> <20220808141708.1021103-9-luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha512; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="dcuh0Jc144kXWsQ6" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20220808141708.1021103-9-luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com> X-Spam-Status: No, score=-7.7 required=5.0 tests=BAYES_00,DKIMWL_WL_HIGH, DKIM_SIGNED,DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,DKIM_VALID_EF,RCVD_IN_DNSWL_HI, SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_PASS,T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=3.4.6 X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.6 (2021-04-09) on lindbergh.monkeyblade.net Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org --dcuh0Jc144kXWsQ6 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline > -First, let us define a couple of terminologies to avoid confusions in the later > -sections. > +First, let us define some terms to avoid confusions in the later sections. Does 'confusion' have a plural? I think singular is better here. 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