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[180.214.232.78]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id b6-20020a170903228600b0016dc8932725sm4387488plh.285.2022.08.20.01.03.22 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 bits=128/128); Sat, 20 Aug 2022 01:03:25 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: <86a26310-eae0-35e8-ede9-e71825db1416@gmail.com> Date: Sat, 20 Aug 2022 15:03:13 +0700 MIME-Version: 1.0 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:91.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/91.12.0 Subject: Re: [PATCH v3] docs: admin-guide/mm: Improve grammar on MM concepts documentation Content-Language: en-US To: alexlzhu@fb.com, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, Kernel-team@fb.com References: <20220820000024.2494003-1-alexlzhu@fb.com> From: Bagas Sanjaya In-Reply-To: <20220820000024.2494003-1-alexlzhu@fb.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Spam-Status: No, score=-0.6 required=5.0 tests=BAYES_00,DKIM_SIGNED, DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,DKIM_VALID_EF,FREEMAIL_FROM,NICE_REPLY_A, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE,RCVD_IN_SORBS_WEB,SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_PASS, T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE autolearn=no autolearn_force=no version=3.4.6 X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.6 (2021-04-09) on lindbergh.monkeyblade.net Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org On 8/20/22 07:00, alexlzhu@fb.com wrote: > From: Alexander Zhu > > Improve grammar on MM concepts documentation. > > Signed-off-by: Alexander Zhu > > Changes in v3: > -Correct punctuation based on previous comment > > Changes in v2: > -Correct the subject > -Adjust the description The changelog should be below the dashes. Otherwise LGTM. Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya -- An old man doll... just what I always wanted! - Clara