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Subject: Re: [PATCH v3] docs: admin-guide/mm: Improve grammar on MM concepts
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> On Aug 20, 2022, at 1:03 AM, Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> On 8/20/22 07:00, alexlzhu@fb.com wrote:
>> From: Alexander Zhu <alexlzhu@fb.com>
>> 
>> Improve grammar on MM concepts documentation.
>> 
>> Signed-off-by: Alexander Zhu <alexlzhu@fb.com>
>> 
>> Changes in v3:
>> -Correct punctuation based on previous comment
>> 
>> Changes in v2:
>> -Correct the subject
>> -Adjust the description
> 
> The changelog should be below the dashes. Otherwise LGTM.
> 
> Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
> 
> -- 
> An old man doll... just what I always wanted! - Clara

Can this be merged then? Or is a v4 needed?