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[180.214.233.88]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id n60-20020a17090a2cc200b001ef81574355sm10625894pjd.12.2022.08.22.18.53.49 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 bits=128/128); Mon, 22 Aug 2022 18:53:51 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: <6d9a7094-274e-1227-d92b-5b282cdf9763@gmail.com> Date: Tue, 23 Aug 2022 08:53:44 +0700 MIME-Version: 1.0 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:91.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/91.12.0 Subject: Re: [PATCH v3] docs: admin-guide/mm: Improve grammar on MM concepts documentation Content-Language: en-US To: "Alex Zhu (Kernel)" Cc: "linux-doc@vger.kernel.org" , "linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org" , Kernel Team References: <20220820000024.2494003-1-alexlzhu@fb.com> <86a26310-eae0-35e8-ede9-e71825db1416@gmail.com> <3C5EA425-A548-47B2-8590-35C38D6D47F2@fb.com> From: Bagas Sanjaya In-Reply-To: <3C5EA425-A548-47B2-8590-35C38D6D47F2@fb.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Spam-Status: No, score=-0.6 required=5.0 tests=BAYES_00,DKIM_SIGNED, DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,DKIM_VALID_EF,FREEMAIL_FROM,NICE_REPLY_A, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE,RCVD_IN_SORBS_WEB,SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_PASS, T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE autolearn=no autolearn_force=no version=3.4.6 X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.6 (2021-04-09) on lindbergh.monkeyblade.net Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org On 8/23/22 05:17, Alex Zhu (Kernel) wrote: >> The changelog should be below the dashes. Otherwise LGTM. >> >> Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya >> >> -- >> An old man doll... just what I always wanted! - Clara > > Can this be merged then? Or is a v4 needed? > Please reroll (send v4). -- An old man doll... just what I always wanted! - Clara