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[180.214.233.72]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id g29-20020aa796bd000000b00535e46171c1sm8714745pfk.117.2022.08.22.20.04.41 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 bits=128/128); Mon, 22 Aug 2022 20:04:43 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: Date: Tue, 23 Aug 2022 10:04:40 +0700 MIME-Version: 1.0 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:91.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/91.12.0 Subject: Re: [PATCH v4] docs: admin-guide/mm: Improve grammar on MM concepts documentation Content-Language: en-US To: alexlzhu@fb.com, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, Kernel-team@fb.com References: <20220823021941.4021897-1-alexlzhu@fb.com> From: Bagas Sanjaya In-Reply-To: <20220823021941.4021897-1-alexlzhu@fb.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Spam-Status: No, score=-0.6 required=5.0 tests=BAYES_00,DKIM_SIGNED, DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,DKIM_VALID_EF,FREEMAIL_FROM,NICE_REPLY_A, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE,RCVD_IN_SORBS_WEB,SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_PASS, T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE autolearn=no autolearn_force=no version=3.4.6 X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.6 (2021-04-09) on lindbergh.monkeyblade.net Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org On 8/23/22 09:19, alexlzhu@fb.com wrote: > From: Alexander Zhu > > Improve grammar on MM concepts documentation. > > Signed-off-by: Alexander Zhu > --- > Changelog: > > Changes in v4: > -Adjust changelog to be below the dashes > > Changes in v3: > -Correct punctuation based on previous comment > > Changes in v2: > -Correct the subject > -Adjust the description > Nicely done. LGTM. Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya -- An old man doll... just what I always wanted! - Clara