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Subject: Re: [PATCH v4] Remove duplicated words across the whole documentation
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To:     Jules Maselbas <jmaselbas@kalray.eu>, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org
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From:   Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>
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Hi Jules,

On 8/26/22 09:56, Jules Maselbas wrote:
> diff --git a/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst b/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst
> index f1f4e6a85a29..6a0c2cc722eb 100644
> --- a/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst
> @@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ The switchdev driver can know a particular port's position in the topology by
>  monitoring NETDEV_CHANGEUPPER notifications.  For example, a port moved into a
>  bond will see it's upper master change.  If that bond is moved into a bridge,
>  the bond's upper master will change.  And so on.  The driver will track such
> -movements to know what position a port is in in the overall topology by
> +movements to know what position a port is in the overall topology by

I don't think any change is needed here.
The rest look good to me.

>  registering for netdevice events and acting on NETDEV_CHANGEUPPER.


> There are likely more duplicated words.

/methinks that you have barely scratched the surface.  :)

-- 
~Randy