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From:   Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>
To:     Jules Maselbas <jmaselbas@kalray.eu>, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org
Cc:     Jules Maselbas <jmaselbas@kalray.eu>,
        Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>,
        Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH v3] Remove duplicated words across the whole documentation
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Date:   Mon, 29 Aug 2022 10:30:57 -0600
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Jules Maselbas <jmaselbas@kalray.eu> writes:

> Remove duplicated words (the, at, be ...) across the whole documentation.
> In some cases the duplicated words are replaced by something that makes
> more sense, for instance: "be be" is replaced by "can be" when possible.
>
> There are likely more duplicated words to be found.
>
> CC: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>
> CC: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
> CC: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>
> CC: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org
> Signed-off-by: Jules Maselbas <jmaselbas@kalray.eu>
> ---
> in v3:
>  as suggested by Randy Dunlap:
>  - remove duplicated 'The the '
>  - remove duplicated 'at at ' (some are replaced by 'at a ')
>  - remove duplicated be, is, to, we, on ...
> in v2:
>  - also remove the second 'the' in one sentence as suggested by
>    Bagas Sanjaya
>
>  Documentation/RCU/checklist.rst                               | 2 +-
>  Documentation/admin-guide/kdump/vmcoreinfo.rst                | 2 +-
>  Documentation/admin-guide/media/vivid.rst                     | 2 +-
>  Documentation/bpf/instruction-set.rst                         | 2 +-
>  Documentation/bpf/map_cgroup_storage.rst                      | 4 ++--
>  Documentation/core-api/cpu_hotplug.rst                        | 3 +--
>  Documentation/devicetree/bindings/arm/arm,vexpress-juno.yaml  | 4 ++--
>  .../devicetree/bindings/arm/tegra/nvidia,tegra20-ahb.txt      | 2 +-

When you redo the patch to reflect the other comments, please split the
devicetree changes into a separate patch.  I don't handle devicetree
stuff, so that will need to go via a separate path.

Thanks,

jon