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From:   Miguel Ojeda <miguel.ojeda.sandonis@gmail.com>
Date:   Fri, 14 Oct 2022 17:21:05 +0200
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Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 1/2] Documentation: Start translations to Spanish
To:     Carlos Bilbao <carlos.bilbao@amd.com>
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        linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, bilbao@vt.edu
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Hi Carlos,

Since you Cc'd me, I guess I can give a quick review. :)

On Fri, Oct 14, 2022 at 4:40 PM Carlos Bilbao <carlos.bilbao@amd.com> wrote=
:
>
> +=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
> +Traducci=C3=B3n al espa=C3=B1ol
> +=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D

I think these should be as long as the title.

> +La propagaci=C3=B3n simultanea de la traducci=C3=B3n de una modificaci=
=C3=B3n en

"simult=C3=A1nea"

> +est=C3=A9 actualizada con las ultimas modificaciones. Si lo que lee en u=
na

"=C3=BAltimas"

> +Una traducci=C3=B3n no es una * bifurcaci=C3=B3n * de la documentaci=C3=
=B3n oficial, por

I am not sure if the spaces are needed.

> +ejemplo, nuevas traducciones, actualizaciones, correcciones).

"...", "etc." or "o"/"y" before  "correcciones"?

> +Las traducciones tratan de ser lo m=C3=A1s precisas posible pero no es p=
osible
> +convertir directamente un idioma a otro. Cada idioma tiene su propia
> +gram=C3=A1tica, y una cultura tras ella, por lo tanto, la traducci=C3=B3=
n de una
> +oraci=C3=B3n al ingl=C3=A9s se podr=C3=ADa modificar para adaptarlo al e=
spa=C3=B1ol. Por esta

"adaptarla"? (if you are referring to "la traducci=C3=B3n" or "una oraci=C3=
=B3n")

> +la forma, pero todav=C3=ADa transmiten el mensaje original. A pesar de l=
a gran
> +difusi=C3=B3n del ingl=C3=A9s en el idioma hablado, cuando sea posible, =
expresiones
> +en ingl=C3=A9s ser=C3=A1n reemplazadas por las palabras correspondientes=
 en espa=C3=B1ol.

I think the sentence wants to say it is common (in the community?) to
use English, but terms will be translated where possible. However, I
am not sure what "en el idioma hablado" means here.

Also, was this based on the English version or another translation?
i.e. this sentence does not seem to be in the English one.

> +sientan mas c=C3=B3modos. En principio, estas peque=C3=B1as diferencias =
no deber=C3=ADan

"m=C3=A1s"

> +La documentaci=C3=B3n del kernel de Linux
> +=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D

I think without the last "de" would be more precise, but I have heard
it this way too.

> +bienvenidas; de modo que, si desea ayudar, =C3=BAnase a la lista de corr=
eo de
> +linux-doc en vger.kernel.org.

Ditto.

Cheers,
Miguel