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Date:   Tue, 29 Nov 2022 10:16:36 +0700
From:   Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
To:     Qais Yousef <qyousef@layalina.io>
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Subject: Re: [PATCH v2] Documentation: sched: Add a new sched-util-clamp.rst
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On Sun, Nov 27, 2022 at 02:26:57PM +0000, Qais Yousef wrote:
> The new util clamp feature needs a document explaining what it is and
> how to use it. The new document hopefully covers everything one needs to
> know about uclamp.
>=20

For patch subject, better say "Documentation: sched: Document util clamp
feature".

> Signed-off-by: Qais Yousef <qais.yousef@arm.com>
> Signed-off-by: Qais Yousef (Google) <qyousef@layalina.io>
> ---
>=20
> Changes in v2:
>=20
> 	* Address various style comments from Bagas
>=20

I don't see any of my wording suggestions from [1] being applied. Still
a rather confused to read (maybe should be applied on top of jon's
suggestions)?

[1]: https://lore.kernel.org/lkml/Y3II59dyKuvQGIhG@debian.me/
[2]: https://lore.kernel.org/linux-doc/87cz976pwn.fsf@meer.lwn.net/

Thanks.

--=20
An old man doll... just what I always wanted! - Clara

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