Date:   Thu, 23 Feb 2023 21:36:54 -0500
From:   Alan Stern <stern@rowland.harvard.edu>
To:     Akira Yokosawa <akiyks@gmail.com>
Cc:     Joel Fernandes <joel@joelfernandes.org>,
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        Jade Alglave <j.alglave@ucl.ac.uk>,
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        Peter Zijlstra <peterz@infradead.org>,
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Subject: Re: [PATCH] tools/memory-model: Add documentation about SRCU
 read-side critical sections
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On Fri, Feb 24, 2023 at 11:32:49AM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote:
> Hi Alan,
> 
> One minor nit.  Please find inline comment below.

> > +The LKMM models uses the srcu-rscsi relation to model SRCU read-side
> 
> I think you mean either:
> 
>    The LKMM models the srcu-rscsi relation ...
> 
> or: 
> 
>    The LKMM uses the srcu-rscsi relation ...

Oops!  Thanks for spotting that.  Yes, I meant the second one.

> With this fixed,
> 
> Reviewed-by: Akira Yokosawa <akiyks@gmail.com>

I'll add this to the next version.

Alan

> > +critical sections.  They are different from RCU read-side critical
> > +sections in the following respects:
> > +
> [...]
> 
>         Thanks, Akira