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Date: Mon, 29 Oct 2007 19:50:25 +0900
From: Keiichi KII <k-keiichi@bx.jp.nec.com>
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To: Randy Dunlap <randy.dunlap@oracle.com>
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       Andy Whitcroft <apw@shadowen.org>
Subject: Re: [PATCH 1/2] fix typo in SubmittingPatches
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Hi,

>> -Once significant exception is when moving code from one file to
>> +One significant exception is when moving code from one file to
>>  another in this case you should not modify the moved code at all in
>>  the same patch which moves it.  This clearly delineates the act of
>>  moving the code and your changes.  This greatly aids review of the
> 
> That first sentence is still broken.  It should be more like this,
> with either a ":" or ";" or " -- " between clauses:
> 
> One significant exception is when moving code from one file to
> another -- in this case you should not modify the moved code at all in
> the same patch which moves it.

Tahnks for your point.
I will fix this sentence as above.

-- 
Keiichi KII
NEC Corporation OSS Platform Development Division
E-mail: k-keiichi@bx.jp.nec.com
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