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Date:   Sat, 12 Aug 2023 13:03:46 +0200
From:   Greg KH <gregkh@linuxfoundation.org>
To:     Thorsten Leemhuis <linux@leemhuis.info>
Cc:     stable@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org,
        linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, Sasha Levin <sashal@kernel.org>,
        Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>
Subject: Re: [PATCH v1 0/5] docs: stable-kernel-rules: improve structure and
 a few tweaks
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On Sat, Aug 05, 2023 at 09:54:25AM +0200, Thorsten Leemhuis wrote:
> [adding Sasha and Jon to the CC, seem I forget to do that on the cover
> letter; sorry!]
> 
> On 05.08.23 09:21, Thorsten Leemhuis wrote:
> > When adding something to this document earlier I noticed that readers
> > need to perform some back and forth to fully understand things; I also
> > noticed a few other aspects that seemed somewhat odd for me with my
> > background on writing and editing texts.
> > 
> > Find attached a few patches to improve things. The first three are
> > mainly moving text around to a structure which is somewhat clearer. They
> > leave quite a few rough edges behind that are fixed in in the last patch
> > of the series, which changes a few other changes as well; thx to the
> > prep patches the diff should be relative straight-forward to understand.
> > 
> > These patches are on-top of the following series that currently is in the 
> > driver-core-testing branch:
> > https://lore.kernel.org/all/cover.1689056247.git.linux@leemhuis.info/
> 
> FWIW, in case anyone wonders how the text looks in the end, see:
> 
> https://www.leemhuis.info/files/kernel/stable-rules/stable-kernel-rules.txt
> 
> https://www.leemhuis.info/files/kernel/stable-rules/Everything%20you%20ever%20wanted%20to%20know%20about%20Linux%20-stable%20releases%20%e2%80%94%20The%20Linux%20Kernel%20documentation.html

Looks very good, thanks!

greg k-h