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Date:   Mon, 2 Oct 2023 09:47:41 +0300
From:   Ville =?iso-8859-1?Q?Syrj=E4l=E4?= <ville.syrjala@linux.intel.com>
To:     Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>
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Subject: Re: [PATCH] drm/i915/uapi: fix doc typos
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On Sun, Oct 01, 2023 at 06:08:24PM -0700, Randy Dunlap wrote:
> Correct typo of "its".
> Add a comma for clarity.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>
> Cc: Jani Nikula <jani.nikula@linux.intel.com>
> Cc: Joonas Lahtinen <joonas.lahtinen@linux.intel.com>
> Cc: Rodrigo Vivi <rodrigo.vivi@intel.com>
> Cc: Tvrtko Ursulin <tvrtko.ursulin@linux.intel.com>
> Cc: intel-gfx@lists.freedesktop.org
> Cc: Maarten Lankhorst <maarten.lankhorst@linux.intel.com>
> Cc: Maxime Ripard <mripard@kernel.org>
> Cc: Thomas Zimmermann <tzimmermann@suse.de>
> Cc: dri-devel@lists.freedesktop.org
> ---
>  include/uapi/drm/i915_drm.h |    6 +++---
>  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
> 
> diff -- a/include/uapi/drm/i915_drm.h b/include/uapi/drm/i915_drm.h
> --- a/include/uapi/drm/i915_drm.h
> +++ b/include/uapi/drm/i915_drm.h
> @@ -38,13 +38,13 @@ extern "C" {
>   */
>  
>  /**
> - * DOC: uevents generated by i915 on it's device node
> + * DOC: uevents generated by i915 on its device node
>   *
>   * I915_L3_PARITY_UEVENT - Generated when the driver receives a parity mismatch
> - *	event from the gpu l3 cache. Additional information supplied is ROW,
> + *	event from the GPU l3 cache. Additional information supplied is ROW,

s/l3/L3/ would also be appropriate if aim to fix the caps.

>   *	BANK, SUBBANK, SLICE of the affected cacheline. Userspace should keep
>   *	track of these events and if a specific cache-line seems to have a
                             ^
I'd put the comma there, but my grasp of English punctuation isn't
all that great so I might be wrong. Or maybe both places should have
one?

> - *	persistent error remap it with the l3 remapping tool supplied in
> + *	persistent error, remap it with the l3 remapping tool supplied in
>   *	intel-gpu-tools.  The value supplied with the event is always 1.
>   *
>   * I915_ERROR_UEVENT - Generated upon error detection, currently only via

-- 
Ville Syrj?l?
Intel