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Miller" , Jakub Kicinski , Eric Dumazet , Paolo Abeni , Jonathan Corbet , netdev@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org References: <20231023192217.426455-24-dima@arista.com> <2745ab4e-acac-40d4-83bf-37f2600d0c3d@web.de> From: Dmitry Safonov In-Reply-To: <2745ab4e-acac-40d4-83bf-37f2600d0c3d@web.de> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Spam-Status: No, score=-0.9 required=5.0 tests=DKIMWL_WL_HIGH,DKIM_SIGNED, DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS, MAILING_LIST_MULTI,SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_PASS,T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE, URIBL_BLOCKED autolearn=unavailable autolearn_force=no version=3.4.6 X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.6 (2021-04-09) on agentk.vger.email Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org X-Greylist: Sender passed SPF test, not delayed by milter-greylist-4.6.4 (agentk.vger.email [0.0.0.0]); Fri, 17 Nov 2023 09:37:25 -0800 (PST) Hi Markus, On 11/17/23 13:07, Markus Elfring wrote: > … >> +++ b/Documentation/networking/tcp_ao.rst >> @@ -0,0 +1,444 @@ > … >> + … failure. But sine keeping > … > > I find this wording improvable. > How do you think about to use the word “since” here? Nice, there are people who actually read the docs! :-) I'll send a patch crediting you. Thanks, Dmitry