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[68.160.135.240]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id s7-20020a0cf647000000b0067a4396f9cdsm3018175qvm.8.2023.11.29.05.53.22 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 bits=128/128); Wed, 29 Nov 2023 05:53:23 -0800 (PST) Message-ID: Date: Wed, 29 Nov 2023 08:53:22 -0500 MIME-Version: 1.0 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:102.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/102.15.1 Content-Language: en-US To: Bagas Sanjaya , Linux Kernel Mailing List , Linux Documentation , Linux Kernel Livepatching Cc: Josh Poimboeuf , Jiri Kosina , Miroslav Benes , Petr Mladek , Jonathan Corbet , Attreyee Mukherjee References: <20231129132527.8078-1-bagasdotme@gmail.com> From: Joe Lawrence Subject: Re: [PATCH 0/2] Minor grammatical fixup for livepatch docs In-Reply-To: <20231129132527.8078-1-bagasdotme@gmail.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.3 required=5.0 tests=BAYES_00,DKIMWL_WL_HIGH, DKIM_SIGNED,DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,DKIM_VALID_EF,NICE_REPLY_A, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_BLOCKED,RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H3,RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_WL, SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_NONE,T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE autolearn=unavailable autolearn_force=no version=3.4.6 X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.6 (2021-04-09) on lindbergh.monkeyblade.net Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org X-Greylist: Sender passed SPF test, not delayed by milter-greylist-4.6.4 (snail.vger.email [0.0.0.0]); Wed, 29 Nov 2023 05:53:47 -0800 (PST) On 11/29/23 08:25, Bagas Sanjaya wrote: > I was prompted to write this little grammar fix series when reading > the fix from Attreyee [1], with review comments requesting changes > to that fix. So here's my version of the fix, with reviews from [1] > addressed (and distinct grammar fixes splitted). > Typical kernel workflow would be for Attreyee to incorporate feedback and post their v2 after a day or two. From the format they posted, it appears to be a first(ish) kernel contribution post. Let's be kind and patient so they we all may benefit from the practice of iterating on their patch. -- Joe