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Tue, 30 Jan 2024 01:22:56 -0800 (PST) Date: Tue, 30 Jan 2024 09:22:52 +0000 In-Reply-To: <20240123150112.124084-1-kernel@valentinobst.de> Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Mime-Version: 1.0 References: <20240123150112.124084-1-kernel@valentinobst.de> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.43.0.429.g432eaa2c6b-goog Message-ID: <20240130092252.1610582-1-aliceryhl@google.com> Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 00/12] rust: kernel: documentation improvements From: Alice Ryhl To: kernel@valentinobst.de Cc: alex.gaynor@gmail.com, fraunhofer@valentinobst.de, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, ojeda@kernel.org, rust-for-linux@vger.kernel.org, wedsonaf@gmail.com, Alice Ryhl Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Valentin Obst writes: > This patch set aims to make small improvements to the documentation of > the kernel crate. It engages in a few different activities: > - fixing trivial typos (commit #1), > - updating code examples to better reflect an idiomatic coding style > (commits #2,6), > - increasing the consistency within the crate's documentation as a whole > (commits #3,5,7,8,9,11,12), > - adding more intra-doc links as well as srctree-relative links to C > header files (commits #4,10). I left one comment [1] on the last patch. With that fixed, you may add: Reviewed-by: Alice Ryhl to all of the patches. (I responded on v1 by accident, but it was v2 that I have reviewed.) [1]: https://lore.kernel.org/rust-for-linux/CAH5fLghSaorRgDDuqNCN-BhQ86ysX96b=nKM_cZAN0_E6Ai04A@mail.gmail.com/