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b=Eivg2FMt4Q4y1ZOkc06YU37qoFiuTvOCiqEOx6dW0GQr5ZVKqHJapAJmQsF0R1GEq zUjyQIjXje2vWPSMAwL+Y3PaqRdwt0v1vh/Wywc3O0BQTcR/mFQ2gXqBnwCqNeCBU7 Ju0uFrMC8+B2RVVcfx/bo0uNr5MGYAUkeGyqqJyNGGIuYzioumpBWL6XQUa/PTooQh TMqyTrZfUrRzA1hNM4tCpisR9JGsKaaiF5gTxx1hhSE1OaLnVOREYqNYVsXXOtWfBU TSEKXm0jSo6TQxh1XFYrnzxZ775PVuf9iHfwcW3Gkm1/8w6eIIfvuW1K0ZKiMjNdX9 INtxJgoA9wxTw== Received: from localhost (unknown [IPv6:2601:280:5e00:7e19::646]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by ms.lwn.net (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id EFFB945AC9; Mon, 5 Feb 2024 17:24:49 +0000 (UTC) From: Jonathan Corbet To: Thorsten Blum , willy@infradead.org Cc: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, thorsten.blum@toblux.com, workflows@vger.kernel.org, Randy Dunlap , Bagas Sanjaya Subject: Re: [PATCH v2] Documentation: multiple .rst files: Fix grammar and more consistent formatting In-Reply-To: <20240205000117.3285-1-thorsten.blum@toblux.com> References: <20240205000117.3285-1-thorsten.blum@toblux.com> Date: Mon, 05 Feb 2024 10:24:49 -0700 Message-ID: <878r3yvn6m.fsf@meer.lwn.net> Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain Thorsten Blum writes: > sphinx.rst: > - Remove unnecessary newline > - Fix grammar s/on/in/ > - Fix grammar s/check/checks/ > - Capitalize heading "The C domain" > > changes.rst: > - Remove colon after "pahole" to be consistent with other entries > > howto.rst: > - Fix grammar s/you will/will you/ > - Hyphenate "real-world problems" > > Signed-off-by: Thorsten Blum > Reviewed-by: Randy Dunlap > Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya > --- > Changes in v2: > - Preserve Reviewed-by: tags > - s/on/in/ in sphinx.rst as suggested by Matthew Wilcox > --- > Documentation/doc-guide/sphinx.rst | 7 +++---- > Documentation/process/changes.rst | 4 ++-- > Documentation/process/howto.rst | 4 ++-- > 3 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) Applied, thanks. jon