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On Tue, 16 Apr 2024 23:23:49 +0200 Alexandre Belloni wrote: > On 16/04/2024 07:56:06+0200, Luca Ceresoli wrote: > > This series applies various improvements to the DAPM documentation: a > > rewrite of a few sections for clarity, style improvements and typo fixes. > > > > Signed-off-by: Luca Ceresoli > > Reviewed-by: Alexandre Belloni > > > --- > > Luca Ceresoli (12): > > ASoC: doc: dapm: fix typos > > ASoC: doc: dapm: fix struct name > > ASoC: doc: dapm: minor rewording > > I'm wondering whether you could improve this patch by not rewrapping the > whole paragraph. Sure. I'm waiting a few more days for any additional comments and then send a v2 with this change. Luca -- Luca Ceresoli, Bootlin Embedded Linux and Kernel engineering https://bootlin.com