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micalg=pgp-sha512; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="G+nCITxMkLxwGcUH" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20240513022430.17626-1-luis.hernandez093@gmail.com> --G+nCITxMkLxwGcUH Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Mon, May 13, 2024 at 02:24:02AM +0000, Luis Felipe Hernandez wrote: > * Updated title capitalization for consistency > * Fixed acronym capitalization (e.g. CPU, vCPU) > * Added usage of hypenated compoud adjective > (e.g. host-side polling, where host-side is modifying polling) > * Added missing verb "as" in "basic logic is as follows" > * Added missing articl "an" in "guest_halt_poll_ns when an event occurs" > * Fixed parameter definition in 4, all previous examples started with > descibing the parameter in the first sentence followed by additional > notes > * Replaced C-terminology Bool in favor of formal form Boolean > * Cleaned up phrasing in "Further Notes" section for clarity >=20 LGTM, thanks! 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