Return-Path: Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1761503AbYF0Qcq (ORCPT ); Fri, 27 Jun 2008 12:32:46 -0400 Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org id S1754059AbYF0Qci (ORCPT ); Fri, 27 Jun 2008 12:32:38 -0400 Received: from zrtps0kp.nortel.com ([47.140.192.56]:65072 "EHLO zrtps0kp.nortel.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1752606AbYF0Qch (ORCPT ); Fri, 27 Jun 2008 12:32:37 -0400 Message-ID: <4865160C.2040403@nortel.com> Date: Fri, 27 Jun 2008 10:32:12 -0600 From: "Chris Friesen" User-Agent: Mozilla Thunderbird 1.0.2-6 (X11/20050513) X-Accept-Language: en-us, en MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Alan Cox CC: "Maciej W. Rozycki" , Cyrill Gorcunov , Ingo Molnar , "H. Peter Anvin" , Thomas Gleixner , LKML Subject: Re: [PATCH -tip/master] x86: nmi_watchdog - documentation fix References: <20080627154340.GC18957@cvg> <20080627165937.2f1fb661@lxorguk.ukuu.org.uk> In-Reply-To: <20080627165937.2f1fb661@lxorguk.ukuu.org.uk> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-OriginalArrivalTime: 27 Jun 2008 16:32:16.0764 (UTC) FILETIME=[5CAB7BC0:01C8D873] Sender: linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Content-Length: 1011 Lines: 33 Alan Cox wrote: > On Fri, 27 Jun 2008 16:54:19 +0100 (BST) > "Maciej W. Rozycki" wrote: > > >>On Fri, 27 Jun 2008, Cyrill Gorcunov wrote: >> >> >>>+NOTE: Prior to 2.4.2-ac18 the NMI-oopser is enabled unconditionally >>>+on x86 SMP boxes. >> >> While you are at it: s/is/was/. > > > Erm - why ?? > > It is still true today that kernels < 2.4.2-ac8 have the NMI oopser > enabled. To my ear the phrase as written implies past tense for the author/reader (i.e. "at points in time prior to the release of 2.4.2-ac18"), and thus grates against "is". The following sounds better to me: "In kernels prior to 2.4.2-ac18 the NMI-oopser is enabled..." In this context the phrase itself is in the present, but we point to past kernels. Chris -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe linux-kernel" in the body of a message to majordomo@vger.kernel.org More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html Please read the FAQ at http://www.tux.org/lkml/