Return-Path: Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1754739AbZGPJPq (ORCPT ); Thu, 16 Jul 2009 05:15:46 -0400 Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org id S1754681AbZGPJPq (ORCPT ); Thu, 16 Jul 2009 05:15:46 -0400 Received: from mail-fx0-f218.google.com ([209.85.220.218]:41523 "EHLO mail-fx0-f218.google.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1754467AbZGPJPp convert rfc822-to-8bit (ORCPT ); Thu, 16 Jul 2009 05:15:45 -0400 DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:subject:from:to :cc:content-type:content-transfer-encoding; b=hPRSixVmOq50qbba0F+VrebeyWZdSXdLQzRUeknILt5E0lzG5CgEnYgigc2iijNNaT zhW5lgxMkYa71cxRUW1bVCBujgSEDc2j1zEWOrO2kSuBrKbpNK6+Af9KOy4lAzcmS4wN PygCxksKvuHIZWiYQUQIqPKYP9t6/U3Oa4MxU= MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: <1247696049-15699-2-git-send-email-vapier@gentoo.org> References: <1247696049-15699-1-git-send-email-vapier@gentoo.org> <1247696049-15699-2-git-send-email-vapier@gentoo.org> Date: Thu, 16 Jul 2009 10:15:43 +0100 Message-ID: <87a5b0800907160215x59ca8b4aj9a1d22b82d12e792@mail.gmail.com> Subject: Re: [PATCH 2/3] connector: clean up grammar/style in documentation From: Will Newton To: Mike Frysinger Cc: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, Evgeniy Polyakov , Andrew Morton Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8BIT Sender: linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Content-Length: 1658 Lines: 33 On Wed, Jul 15, 2009 at 11:14 PM, Mike Frysinger wrote: > The grammar in most of this file is slightly off, and some sections are > hard to read due to lack of visual clues breaking up related material. > > Signed-off-by: Mike Frysinger > --- > ?Documentation/connector/connector.txt | ?119 +++++++++++++++++---------------- > ?1 files changed, 61 insertions(+), 58 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/Documentation/connector/connector.txt b/Documentation/connector/connector.txt > index ad6e0ba..847f0d8 100644 > --- a/Documentation/connector/connector.txt > +++ b/Documentation/connector/connector.txt > @@ -5,10 +5,10 @@ Kernel Connector. > ?Kernel connector - new netlink based userspace <-> kernel space easy > ?to use communication module. > > -Connector driver adds possibility to connect various agents using > -netlink based network. ?One must register callback and > -identifier. When driver receives special netlink message with > -appropriate identifier, appropriate callback will be called. > +The Connector driver adds makes it easy to connect various agents using a > +netlink based network. ?One must register a callback and an identifier. > +When the driver receives a special netlink message with the appropriate > +identifier, the appropriate callback will be called. The first line of the second paragraph still needs work, "adds" should probably be removed. -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe linux-kernel" in the body of a message to majordomo@vger.kernel.org More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html Please read the FAQ at http://www.tux.org/lkml/