Return-Path: Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1753410Ab1CZR3J (ORCPT ); Sat, 26 Mar 2011 13:29:09 -0400 Received: from oproxy2-pub.bluehost.com ([67.222.39.60]:57045 "HELO oproxy2-pub.bluehost.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with SMTP id S1753197Ab1CZR3H (ORCPT ); Sat, 26 Mar 2011 13:29:07 -0400 DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; q=dns; c=nofws; s=default; d=xenotime.net; h=Received:Date:From:To:Cc:Subject:Message-Id:In-Reply-To:References:Organization:X-Mailer:Mime-Version:Content-Type:Content-Transfer-Encoding:X-Identified-User; b=WsjAr11fFTNUFRsLWXxYY2sv+vpy2q3XjQEbnzBYIXxJCIpDmXVCIi9KICNt+T7tdgDRDaBBjaZfhXdAfDVi5lJCEb6FxDmP6x+LHyeh8dQF8Px2YFNnYGz1dWvc8Tu3; Date: Sat, 26 Mar 2011 10:29:05 -0700 From: Randy Dunlap To: Sylvestre Ledru Cc: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH] Fix some minor typos: * informations => information * there own => their own * an => and (bug #14973) Message-Id: <20110326102905.bae3c800.rdunlap@xenotime.net> In-Reply-To: <1301010464-22583-1-git-send-email-sylvestre.ledru@scilab.org> References: <1301010464-22583-1-git-send-email-sylvestre.ledru@scilab.org> Organization: YPO4 X-Mailer: Sylpheed 2.7.1 (GTK+ 2.16.6; x86_64-unknown-linux-gnu) Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Identified-User: {1807:box742.bluehost.com:xenotime:xenotime.net} {sentby:smtp auth 173.50.240.230 authed with rdunlap@xenotime.net} Sender: linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Content-Length: 4975 Lines: 122 On Fri, 25 Mar 2011 00:47:44 +0100 Sylvestre Ledru wrote: Hi, This patch is mostly good, with a few exceptions as noted below. Please resend a complete corrected patch. > Signed-off-by: Sylvestre Ledru > --- > .../ABI/testing/sysfs-driver-hid-roccat-kone | 2 +- > .../ABI/testing/sysfs-driver-hid-roccat-koneplus | 8 ++++---- > .../ABI/testing/sysfs-driver-hid-roccat-kovaplus | 8 ++++---- > .../ABI/testing/sysfs-driver-hid-roccat-pyra | 8 ++++---- > .../ABI/testing/sysfs-platform-asus-laptop | 2 +- > Documentation/devicetree/booting-without-of.txt | 6 +++--- > Documentation/dvb/udev.txt | 2 +- > Documentation/edac.txt | 2 +- > Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt | 4 ++-- > Documentation/laptops/asus-laptop.txt | 4 ++-- > Documentation/networking/batman-adv.txt | 2 +- > Documentation/s390/Debugging390.txt | 2 +- > Documentation/scsi/sym53c8xx_2.txt | 2 +- > Documentation/sound/alsa/ALSA-Configuration.txt | 2 +- > Documentation/sound/oss/AudioExcelDSP16 | 6 +++--- > Documentation/sound/oss/README.ymfsb | 2 +- > Documentation/video4linux/bttv/Insmod-options | 2 +- > Documentation/video4linux/bttv/Sound-FAQ | 2 +- > Documentation/video4linux/et61x251.txt | 4 ++-- > Documentation/video4linux/sn9c102.txt | 4 ++-- > Documentation/video4linux/w9968cf.txt | 2 +- > Documentation/video4linux/zc0301.txt | 6 +++--- > arch/powerpc/mm/tlb_low_64e.S | 2 +- > arch/powerpc/platforms/Kconfig | 2 +- > fs/notify/fanotify/Kconfig | 2 +- > 25 files changed, 44 insertions(+), 44 deletions(-) > diff --git a/Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-platform-asus-laptop b/Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-platform-asus-laptop > index 41ff8ae..01160d8 100644 > --- a/Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-platform-asus-laptop > +++ b/Documentation/ABI/testing/sysfs-platform-asus-laptop > @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ KernelVersion: 2.6.20 > Contact: "Corentin Chary" > Description: > Some models like the W1N have a LED display that can be an > - used to display several informations. > + used to display several information. Either way is awkward. Needs something more like: used to display several items of information. > To control the LED display, use the following : > echo 0x0T000DDD > /sys/devices/platform/asus_laptop/ > where T control the 3 letters display, and DDD the 3 digits display. > diff --git a/Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt b/Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt > index d18a9e1..29ac507 100644 > --- a/Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt > +++ b/Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt > @@ -2463,8 +2463,8 @@ bytes respectively. Such letter suffixes can also be entirely omitted. > topology= [S390] > Format: {off | on} > Specify if the kernel should make use of the cpu > - topology informations if the hardware supports these. > - The scheduler will make use of these informations and > + topology information if the hardware supports these. s/these/this/ just as was done below. > + The scheduler will make use of this information and > e.g. base its process migration decisions on it. > Default is on. > > diff --git a/Documentation/laptops/asus-laptop.txt b/Documentation/laptops/asus-laptop.txt > index c1c5be8..90d8b86 100644 > --- a/Documentation/laptops/asus-laptop.txt > +++ b/Documentation/laptops/asus-laptop.txt > @@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ LED display > ----------- > > Some models like the W1N have a LED display that can be used to display > - several informations. > + several information. Same comment as above. > > LED display works for the following models: > W1000N > diff --git a/fs/notify/fanotify/Kconfig b/fs/notify/fanotify/Kconfig > index 7dceff0..30dc09c 100644 > --- a/fs/notify/fanotify/Kconfig > +++ b/fs/notify/fanotify/Kconfig > @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ config FANOTIFY > ---help--- > Say Y here to enable fanotify suport. fanotify is a file access > notification system which differs from inotify in that it sends > - an open file descriptor to the userspace listener along with > + and opens file descriptor to the userspace listener along with Nope, "an open" is correct. > the event. > > If unsure, say Y. > -- --- ~Randy *** Remember to use Documentation/SubmitChecklist when testing your code *** -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe linux-kernel" in the body of a message to majordomo@vger.kernel.org More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html Please read the FAQ at http://www.tux.org/lkml/