2008-06-24 13:37:29

by Cong Wang

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Subject: [Patch] Documentation/kdump/kdump.txt: fix some words


This is a trivial patch that only fixes mistakes in
Documentation/kdump/kdump.txt.

Signed-off-by: WANG Cong <[email protected]>
Cc: Randy Dunlap <[email protected]>
Cc: Vivek Goyal <[email protected]>
Cc: Maneesh Soni <[email protected]>

---
diff --git a/Documentation/kdump/kdump.txt b/Documentation/kdump/kdump.txt
index b8e52c0..0ffa90c 100644
--- a/Documentation/kdump/kdump.txt
+++ b/Documentation/kdump/kdump.txt
@@ -108,15 +108,15 @@ There are two possible methods of using Kdump.

2) Or use the system kernel binary itself as dump-capture kernel and there is
no need to build a separate dump-capture kernel. This is possible
- only with the architecutres which support a relocatable kernel. As
- of today i386 and ia64 architectures support relocatable kernel.
+ only for the architectures which support a relocatable kernel. As
+ of today i386 and ia64 architectures support a relocatable kernel.

Building a relocatable kernel is advantageous from the point of view that
one does not have to build a second kernel for capturing the dump. But
at the same time one might want to build a custom dump capture kernel
suitable to his needs.

-Following are the configuration setting required for system and
+Following are the configuration settings required for system and
dump-capture kernels for enabling kdump support.

System kernel config options
@@ -299,14 +299,14 @@ For ia64:
- Use vmlinux or vmlinuz.gz


-If you are using a uncompressed vmlinux image then use following command
+If you are using an uncompressed vmlinux image then use the following command
to load dump-capture kernel.

kexec -p <dump-capture-kernel-vmlinux-image> \
--initrd=<initrd-for-dump-capture-kernel> --args-linux \
--append="root=<root-dev> <arch-specific-options>"

-If you are using a compressed bzImage/vmlinuz, then use following command
+If you are using a compressed bzImage/vmlinuz, then use the following command
to load dump-capture kernel.

kexec -p <dump-capture-kernel-bzImage> \
@@ -315,7 +315,7 @@ to load dump-capture kernel.

Please note, that --args-linux does not need to be specified for ia64.
It is planned to make this a no-op on that architecture, but for now
-it should be omitted
+it should be omitted.

Following are the arch specific command line options to be used while
loading dump-capture kernel.
@@ -347,7 +347,7 @@ Notes on loading the dump-capture kernel:
* Boot parameter "1" boots the dump-capture kernel into single-user
mode without networking. If you want networking, use "3".

-* We generally don' have to bring up a SMP kernel just to capture the
+* We generally don't have to bring up a SMP kernel just to capture the
dump. Hence generally it is useful either to build a UP dump-capture
kernel or specify maxcpus=1 option while loading dump-capture kernel.


2008-06-24 23:19:35

by Randy Dunlap

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Subject: Re: [Patch] Documentation/kdump/kdump.txt: fix some words

On Tue, 24 Jun 2008 14:33:55 +0100 WANG Cong wrote:

>
> This is a trivial patch that only fixes mistakes in
> Documentation/kdump/kdump.txt.
>
> Signed-off-by: WANG Cong <[email protected]>
> Cc: Randy Dunlap <[email protected]>

Acked-by: Randy Dunlap <[email protected]>

Thanks.

> Cc: Vivek Goyal <[email protected]>
> Cc: Maneesh Soni <[email protected]>
>
> ---
> diff --git a/Documentation/kdump/kdump.txt b/Documentation/kdump/kdump.txt
> index b8e52c0..0ffa90c 100644
> --- a/Documentation/kdump/kdump.txt
> +++ b/Documentation/kdump/kdump.txt
> @@ -108,15 +108,15 @@ There are two possible methods of using Kdump.
>
> 2) Or use the system kernel binary itself as dump-capture kernel and there is
> no need to build a separate dump-capture kernel. This is possible
> - only with the architecutres which support a relocatable kernel. As
> - of today i386 and ia64 architectures support relocatable kernel.
> + only for the architectures which support a relocatable kernel. As
> + of today i386 and ia64 architectures support a relocatable kernel.
>
> Building a relocatable kernel is advantageous from the point of view that
> one does not have to build a second kernel for capturing the dump. But
> at the same time one might want to build a custom dump capture kernel
> suitable to his needs.
>
> -Following are the configuration setting required for system and
> +Following are the configuration settings required for system and
> dump-capture kernels for enabling kdump support.
>
> System kernel config options
> @@ -299,14 +299,14 @@ For ia64:
> - Use vmlinux or vmlinuz.gz
>
>
> -If you are using a uncompressed vmlinux image then use following command
> +If you are using an uncompressed vmlinux image then use the following command
> to load dump-capture kernel.
>
> kexec -p <dump-capture-kernel-vmlinux-image> \
> --initrd=<initrd-for-dump-capture-kernel> --args-linux \
> --append="root=<root-dev> <arch-specific-options>"
>
> -If you are using a compressed bzImage/vmlinuz, then use following command
> +If you are using a compressed bzImage/vmlinuz, then use the following command
> to load dump-capture kernel.
>
> kexec -p <dump-capture-kernel-bzImage> \
> @@ -315,7 +315,7 @@ to load dump-capture kernel.
>
> Please note, that --args-linux does not need to be specified for ia64.
> It is planned to make this a no-op on that architecture, but for now
> -it should be omitted
> +it should be omitted.
>
> Following are the arch specific command line options to be used while
> loading dump-capture kernel.
> @@ -347,7 +347,7 @@ Notes on loading the dump-capture kernel:
> * Boot parameter "1" boots the dump-capture kernel into single-user
> mode without networking. If you want networking, use "3".
>
> -* We generally don' have to bring up a SMP kernel just to capture the
> +* We generally don't have to bring up a SMP kernel just to capture the
> dump. Hence generally it is useful either to build a UP dump-capture
> kernel or specify maxcpus=1 option while loading dump-capture kernel.
>
>


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~Randy
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