"The rtla" doesn't make sense, change it to "The rtla tool"
This is better than removing the word "The" since some packaging tools
need the description to start with a capital letter.
Signed-off-by: John Kacur <[email protected]>
---
tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt | 2 +-
1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
diff --git a/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt b/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
index 6c88446f7e74..3b809eeff5f9 100644
--- a/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
+++ b/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
RTLA: Real-Time Linux Analysis tools
-The rtla is a meta-tool that includes a set of commands that
+The rtla tool is a meta-tool that includes a set of commands that
aims to analyze the real-time properties of Linux. But, instead of
testing Linux as a black box, rtla leverages kernel tracing
capabilities to provide precise information about the properties
--
2.31.1
>>> -The rtla is a meta-tool that includes a set of commands that
>>> +The rtla tool is a meta-tool that includes a set of commands that
>> I do not like bike-shedding but 'the rtla tool is a meta-tool" sounds repetitive.
>>
>> Does:
>>
>> The rtla meta-tool includes a set of commands...
>>
>> sound good for you?
>>
>> -- Daniel
>>
>>
> Perfect
>
Would you mind re-sending this patch?
You will also need to adjust the paragraph alignment as the first line is
shorter now ...
-- Daniel
On Fri, 8 Apr 2022, Daniel Bristot de Oliveira wrote:
> On 4/2/22 06:39, John Kacur wrote:
> > "The rtla" doesn't make sense, change it to "The rtla tool"
> > This is better than removing the word "The" since some packaging tools
> > need the description to start with a capital letter.
> >
> > Signed-off-by: John Kacur <[email protected]>
> > ---
> > tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt | 2 +-
> > 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
> >
> > diff --git a/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt b/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
> > index 6c88446f7e74..3b809eeff5f9 100644
> > --- a/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
> > +++ b/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
> > @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
> > RTLA: Real-Time Linux Analysis tools
> >
> > -The rtla is a meta-tool that includes a set of commands that
> > +The rtla tool is a meta-tool that includes a set of commands that
>
> I do not like bike-shedding but 'the rtla tool is a meta-tool" sounds repetitive.
>
> Does:
>
> The rtla meta-tool includes a set of commands...
>
> sound good for you?
>
> -- Daniel
>
>
Perfect
On 4/2/22 06:39, John Kacur wrote:
> "The rtla" doesn't make sense, change it to "The rtla tool"
> This is better than removing the word "The" since some packaging tools
> need the description to start with a capital letter.
>
> Signed-off-by: John Kacur <[email protected]>
> ---
> tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt | 2 +-
> 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
>
> diff --git a/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt b/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
> index 6c88446f7e74..3b809eeff5f9 100644
> --- a/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
> +++ b/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
> @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
> RTLA: Real-Time Linux Analysis tools
>
> -The rtla is a meta-tool that includes a set of commands that
> +The rtla tool is a meta-tool that includes a set of commands that
I do not like bike-shedding but 'the rtla tool is a meta-tool" sounds repetitive.
Does:
The rtla meta-tool includes a set of commands...
sound good for you?
-- Daniel