2022-12-27 12:37:00

by William Qiu

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Subject: [PATCH v2 1/3] dt-bindings: mmc: Add bindings for StarFive

Add documentation to describe StarFive
designware mobile storage host controller driver.

Signed-off-by: William Qiu <[email protected]>
---
.../bindings/mmc/starfive,jh7110-mmc.yaml | 72 +++++++++++++++++++
1 file changed, 72 insertions(+)
create mode 100644 Documentation/devicetree/bindings/mmc/starfive,jh7110-mmc.yaml

diff --git a/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/mmc/starfive,jh7110-mmc.yaml b/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/mmc/starfive,jh7110-mmc.yaml
new file mode 100644
index 000000000000..430dd5f24933
--- /dev/null
+++ b/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/mmc/starfive,jh7110-mmc.yaml
@@ -0,0 +1,72 @@
+# SPDX-License-Identifier: GPL-2.0-only OR BSD-2-Clause
+%YAML 1.2
+---
+$id: http://devicetree.org/schemas/mmc/starfive,jh7110-mmc.yaml#
+$schema: http://devicetree.org/meta-schemas/core.yaml#
+
+title: StarFive Designware Mobile Storage Host Controller
+
+description:
+ StarFive uses the Synopsys designware mobile storage host controller
+ to interface a SoC with storage medium such as eMMC or SD/MMC cards.
+
+allOf:
+ - $ref: synopsys-dw-mshc-common.yaml#
+
+maintainers:
+ - William Qiu <[email protected]>
+
+properties:
+ compatible:
+ const: starfive,jh7110-mmc
+
+ reg:
+ maxItems: 1
+
+ clocks:
+ items:
+ - description: biu clock
+ - description: ciu clock
+
+ clock-names:
+ items:
+ - const: biu
+ - const: ciu
+
+ interrupts:
+ maxItems: 1
+
+ starfive,syscon:
+ $ref: /schemas/types.yaml#/definitions/phandle-array
+ description:
+ arg0:arg0 is syscon.
+ arg1:arg1 is syscon register offset, used to enable MMC function.
+ arg2:arg2 is used to enable the register shift of the MMC function.
+ arg3:arg3 is used to enable the register mask of the MMC function.
+
+required:
+ - compatible
+ - reg
+ - clocks
+ - clock-names
+ - interrupts
+ - starfive,syscon
+
+unevaluatedProperties: false
+
+examples:
+ - |
+ mmc@16010000 {
+ compatible = "starfive,jh7110-mmc";
+ reg = <0x16010000 0x10000>;
+ clocks = <&syscrg 91>,
+ <&syscrg 93>;
+ clock-names = "biu","ciu";
+ resets = <&syscrg 64>;
+ reset-names = "reset";
+ interrupts = <74>;
+ fifo-depth = <32>;
+ fifo-watermark-aligned;
+ data-addr = <0>;
+ starfive,syscon = <&syscon 0x14 0x1a 0x7c000000>;
+ };
--
2.34.1


2022-12-27 13:08:23

by Krzysztof Kozlowski

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Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 1/3] dt-bindings: mmc: Add bindings for StarFive

On 27/12/2022 13:22, William Qiu wrote:
> Add documentation to describe StarFive
> designware mobile storage host controller driver.

Please wrap commit message according to Linux coding style / submission
process (neither too early nor over the limit):
https://elixir.bootlin.com/linux/v5.18-rc4/source/Documentation/process/submitting-patches.rst#L586

The subject is a bit redundant and not precise. No need to mention
"bindings" twice but "StarFive" is really too generic. Do you add now
all possible devices from StarFive? I see only one. Rephrase (use git
log to find examples).

>
> Signed-off-by: William Qiu <[email protected]>
> ---
> .../bindings/mmc/starfive,jh7110-mmc.yaml | 72 +++++++++++++++++++
> 1 file changed, 72 insertions(+)
> create mode 100644 Documentation/devicetree/bindings/mmc/starfive,jh7110-mmc.yaml
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/mmc/starfive,jh7110-mmc.yaml b/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/mmc/starfive,jh7110-mmc.yaml
> new file mode 100644
> index 000000000000..430dd5f24933
> --- /dev/null
> +++ b/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/mmc/starfive,jh7110-mmc.yaml
> @@ -0,0 +1,72 @@
> +# SPDX-License-Identifier: GPL-2.0-only OR BSD-2-Clause
> +%YAML 1.2
> +---
> +$id: http://devicetree.org/schemas/mmc/starfive,jh7110-mmc.yaml#
> +$schema: http://devicetree.org/meta-schemas/core.yaml#
> +
> +title: StarFive Designware Mobile Storage Host Controller
> +
> +description:
> + StarFive uses the Synopsys designware mobile storage host controller
> + to interface a SoC with storage medium such as eMMC or SD/MMC cards.
> +
> +allOf:
> + - $ref: synopsys-dw-mshc-common.yaml#
> +
> +maintainers:
> + - William Qiu <[email protected]>
> +
> +properties:
> + compatible:
> + const: starfive,jh7110-mmc
> +
> + reg:
> + maxItems: 1
> +
> + clocks:
> + items:
> + - description: biu clock
> + - description: ciu clock
> +
> + clock-names:
> + items:
> + - const: biu
> + - const: ciu
> +
> + interrupts:
> + maxItems: 1
> +
> + starfive,syscon:

Name is not specific enough. What is syscon? Any syscon? This needs to
be specific.

> + $ref: /schemas/types.yaml#/definitions/phandle-array
> + description:
> + arg0:arg0 is syscon.

What is syscon?

> + arg1:arg1 is syscon register offset, used to enable MMC function.

Describe the argument, not what it is used for, e.g. "offset of XXX YYY ZZZ"

> + arg2:arg2 is used to enable the register shift of the MMC function.
> + arg3:arg3 is used to enable the register mask of the MMC function.

That's not how the phandle array is described. Instead:

https://elixir.bootlin.com/linux/v5.18-rc1/source/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/soc/samsung/exynos-usi.yaml#L42



Best regards,
Krzysztof

2022-12-28 11:05:50

by William Qiu

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Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 1/3] dt-bindings: mmc: Add bindings for StarFive



On 2022/12/27 21:05, Krzysztof Kozlowski wrote:
> On 27/12/2022 13:22, William Qiu wrote:
>> Add documentation to describe StarFive
>> designware mobile storage host controller driver.
>
> Please wrap commit message according to Linux coding style / submission
> process (neither too early nor over the limit):
> https://elixir.bootlin.com/linux/v5.18-rc4/source/Documentation/process/submitting-patches.rst#L586
>
> The subject is a bit redundant and not precise. No need to mention
> "bindings" twice but "StarFive" is really too generic. Do you add now
> all possible devices from StarFive? I see only one. Rephrase (use git
> log to find examples).
>

Will update

>>
>> Signed-off-by: William Qiu <[email protected]>
>> ---
>> .../bindings/mmc/starfive,jh7110-mmc.yaml | 72 +++++++++++++++++++
>> 1 file changed, 72 insertions(+)
>> create mode 100644 Documentation/devicetree/bindings/mmc/starfive,jh7110-mmc.yaml
>>
>> diff --git a/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/mmc/starfive,jh7110-mmc.yaml b/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/mmc/starfive,jh7110-mmc.yaml
>> new file mode 100644
>> index 000000000000..430dd5f24933
>> --- /dev/null
>> +++ b/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/mmc/starfive,jh7110-mmc.yaml
>> @@ -0,0 +1,72 @@
>> +# SPDX-License-Identifier: GPL-2.0-only OR BSD-2-Clause
>> +%YAML 1.2
>> +---
>> +$id: http://devicetree.org/schemas/mmc/starfive,jh7110-mmc.yaml#
>> +$schema: http://devicetree.org/meta-schemas/core.yaml#
>> +
>> +title: StarFive Designware Mobile Storage Host Controller
>> +
>> +description:
>> + StarFive uses the Synopsys designware mobile storage host controller
>> + to interface a SoC with storage medium such as eMMC or SD/MMC cards.
>> +
>> +allOf:
>> + - $ref: synopsys-dw-mshc-common.yaml#
>> +
>> +maintainers:
>> + - William Qiu <[email protected]>
>> +
>> +properties:
>> + compatible:
>> + const: starfive,jh7110-mmc
>> +
>> + reg:
>> + maxItems: 1
>> +
>> + clocks:
>> + items:
>> + - description: biu clock
>> + - description: ciu clock
>> +
>> + clock-names:
>> + items:
>> + - const: biu
>> + - const: ciu
>> +
>> + interrupts:
>> + maxItems: 1
>> +
>> + starfive,syscon:
>
> Name is not specific enough. What is syscon? Any syscon? This needs to
> be specific.
>

Will update.

>> + $ref: /schemas/types.yaml#/definitions/phandle-array
>> + description:
>> + arg0:arg0 is syscon.
>
> What is syscon?
>

Will update.

>> + arg1:arg1 is syscon register offset, used to enable MMC function.
>
> Describe the argument, not what it is used for, e.g. "offset of XXX YYY ZZZ"
>
>> + arg2:arg2 is used to enable the register shift of the MMC function.
>> + arg3:arg3 is used to enable the register mask of the MMC function.
>
> That's not how the phandle array is described. Instead:
>
> https://elixir.bootlin.com/linux/v5.18-rc1/source/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/soc/samsung/exynos-usi.yaml#L42
>

Hi Krzysztof,

Thank you for taking time to review and provide helpful comments for this patch.
I will fix all the above issues in the next version.

Best Regards,
William Qiu

>
>
> Best regards,
> Krzysztof
>