2022-10-22 08:26:39

by wangjianli

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Subject: [PATCH] net/mptcp: fix repeated words in comments

Delete the redundant word 'the'.

Signed-off-by: wangjianli <[email protected]>
---
net/mptcp/token.c | 2 +-
1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/net/mptcp/token.c b/net/mptcp/token.c
index f52ee7b26aed..b817c2564300 100644
--- a/net/mptcp/token.c
+++ b/net/mptcp/token.c
@@ -287,7 +287,7 @@ EXPORT_SYMBOL_GPL(mptcp_token_get_sock);
* This function returns the first mptcp connection structure found inside the
* token container starting from the specified position, or NULL.
*
- * On successful iteration, the iterator is move to the next position and the
+ * On successful iteration, the iterator is move to the next position and
* the acquires a reference to the returned socket.
*/
struct mptcp_sock *mptcp_token_iter_next(const struct net *net, long *s_slot,
--
2.36.1


2022-10-23 14:34:25

by Bagas Sanjaya

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Subject: Re: [PATCH] net/mptcp: fix repeated words in comments

On Sat, Oct 22, 2022 at 03:05:27PM +0800, wangjianli wrote:
> Delete the redundant word 'the'.
>
> Signed-off-by: wangjianli <[email protected]>
> ---
> net/mptcp/token.c | 2 +-
> 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
>
> diff --git a/net/mptcp/token.c b/net/mptcp/token.c
> index f52ee7b26aed..b817c2564300 100644
> --- a/net/mptcp/token.c
> +++ b/net/mptcp/token.c
> @@ -287,7 +287,7 @@ EXPORT_SYMBOL_GPL(mptcp_token_get_sock);
> * This function returns the first mptcp connection structure found inside the
> * token container starting from the specified position, or NULL.
> *
> - * On successful iteration, the iterator is move to the next position and the
> + * On successful iteration, the iterator is move to the next position and
> * the acquires a reference to the returned socket.
> */
> struct mptcp_sock *mptcp_token_iter_next(const struct net *net, long *s_slot,

NAK!

Instead, slightly reword the comment above as "On successful iteration,
the iterator moves to the next position and acquires a reference to the
returned socket.".

Also, you and other @cdjrlc.com developers ignore reviews that request
changes to your patches. If you want to participate in kernel
development community, please don't just sending random patches without
any sort of reply.

I have pointed out this behavior either as part of my review or as reply
to reviews from other developers. I may write this as final warning before
I just say NAK without further ado to your future patches.

Thanks.

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2022-10-25 00:25:05

by Mat Martineau

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Subject: Re: [PATCH] net/mptcp: fix repeated words in comments

On Sun, 23 Oct 2022, Bagas Sanjaya wrote:

> On Sat, Oct 22, 2022 at 03:05:27PM +0800, wangjianli wrote:
>> Delete the redundant word 'the'.
>>
>> Signed-off-by: wangjianli <[email protected]>
>> ---
>> net/mptcp/token.c | 2 +-
>> 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
>>
>> diff --git a/net/mptcp/token.c b/net/mptcp/token.c
>> index f52ee7b26aed..b817c2564300 100644
>> --- a/net/mptcp/token.c
>> +++ b/net/mptcp/token.c
>> @@ -287,7 +287,7 @@ EXPORT_SYMBOL_GPL(mptcp_token_get_sock);
>> * This function returns the first mptcp connection structure found inside the
>> * token container starting from the specified position, or NULL.
>> *
>> - * On successful iteration, the iterator is move to the next position and the
>> + * On successful iteration, the iterator is move to the next position and
>> * the acquires a reference to the returned socket.
>> */
>> struct mptcp_sock *mptcp_token_iter_next(const struct net *net, long *s_slot,
>
> NAK!
>
> Instead, slightly reword the comment above as "On successful iteration,
> the iterator moves to the next position and acquires a reference to the
> returned socket.".
>

Agree on this rewording.

This particular duplicated word came up before, and I thought it would be
best if the author sent a v2 - but they never did. I will fix this in the
MPTCP tree next week if there's no suitable v2 by then.

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Mat Martineau
Intel